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These LittleLittle Words

March 4, 2010
By MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

Letting the gentle
gentle caress of your voice
follow me down the hall,
and assure me we're OK.

Feeling your powerful
powerful charm
pull me under,
and washing me clean of tears.

Hearing the thump
thump of your heart
makes my stomach jerk with a smile,
and reminds me you're right there.

Having our peaceful
peaceful talks
can always bring a smile
to my face,
and hardly ever
rushes through anything.

Looking into your deep
deep bright-eyes
I know I'll be getting lost,
and feeling
like the sea is rushing over me.

And the caress
is the most wonderful
of assurances I've felt;
Your charm
gives the strongest sense
of trust I've ever had;
The thump of your heart
is the best song I know;
Our calming talks
are some of the most
complete ones I have.
Your eyes looking into mine
is the perfect wave
crashing over me.

And these little
little words
can't truly
sum up my feelings inside,
or the ways you make me happy.

The author's comments:
This isn't actually the emotions i wanted to capture but I will try again later :) What do you all think of this piece though?

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