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* Stars *

March 1, 2010
By Someone_Who_Is_Loved GOLD, Mount Forest, Other
Someone_Who_Is_Loved GOLD, Mount Forest, Other
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Favorite Quote:
This quote is one I made up.....
"You can't climb a mountian without a harness." It means that you can't go where you want to get in life without the help of your friends or family.

I look up and count the stars,
I look and see one really bright.
Stars are like souls of the dead,
They leave you ... but you can see them at night.

I never got to talk to you,
Hear your laugh, or see your face.
I imagine you in my dreams.
You're always whispering some time and place.

Are you out there as a star?
If you are a starwhat do you see?
As I lay here praying, I wonder...
Since you are up so high... Can you still see me?

So next time your out there at night,
Make sure you hear me say...
"Robert I love you,
I will see your face one day."

The author's comments:
This poem is about my uncle who passed away before I was born from a brain tumour. I sometimes think Robert is my angel and I KNOW he looks after me. Do you think when people pass away they become stars? I do.

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on Sep. 13 2010 at 9:42 am
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

this is really interesting. :) i've though about souls being stars before, but you captured something i have not.  good job