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Ocean blue

February 24, 2010
By cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
The minority can change the majority.


As I watch I see every ripple that flows through,
every glisten and gleam from the blue.
Sunlight dances as I watch, radiating oh-so-beautifully,
shining wildly into my eyes.







Running my hands across, a cold finger runs down my back,
a surface so chilling though warmth settles through.

Sitting and watching my favorite thing to do.
Staring deep into the blue becoming lost with wonder.
Full of surprises it seems, I never know what they maybe,
For everything inevitably comes upon your shore.
As I sit and reminisce in your vast and intense darkness,
looking deep within gives me peace,
in the silence respect flows through me,
your strength radiating.
I feel it in my bones and I’m slowly craving more,
feeling your touch now everything flows clearly.


The author's comments:
This just fell together, it has dual meaning if you can see it. I made the body and my Camaratta tweaked the strings.

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cjsweetie said...
on May. 1 2010 at 11:25 am
my boyfriend did...

on Apr. 19 2010 at 8:08 pm
reillysmiley22 GOLD, Hoosick Falls, New York
18 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don think ive said to many serious things that can be admired and arent totally foolish, but my all time favorite quote is "Only those who dare to fail greatly can ever achieve greatly." - Robert F. Kennedy

creates really strong, intense pictures in my mind- this is extremely good

yasmin said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 12:50 am
hi, i really like this. :) what was your inspiration for it? i hope you keep writing.

on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:57 pm
BasketballChick5, San Diego, California
0 articles 1 photo 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
:)Just Do It:) <3

 liked this one too:):) keep writting.

on Mar. 23 2010 at 4:54 pm
LuisManuel SILVER, Clewiston, Florida
7 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Success is Uncommon, therefore NOT to be enjoyed by the common man. BE UNCOMMON.&quot;<br /> <br /> -Cal Stoll

Cj that was awesome,...! I liked it!

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 3:06 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you&#039;re a mile away from them and you have their shoes.<br /> --When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people&#039;s eyes.

this definately made me think. well done!

on Mar. 23 2010 at 9:37 am
cjsweetie BRONZE, Clewiston, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
The minority can change the majority.

Thank you lots

JeanGrey GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 12:19 pm
JeanGrey GOLD, Mason City, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 258 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am so clever that sometimes I don&#039;t understand a single word of what I am saying.&quot;-Oscar Wilde

I love it! Very deep and emotional..great! keep writing!