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February 24, 2010
By Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Life isn&#039;t about waiting for the storm to pass...<br /> It&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.<br /> -Vivian Greene

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It's hard to take
darkness seriously
when you've only
been dipped by
the edges.

© Jamie D., Bethesdsa, MD

The author's comments:
I was talking to one of my friends that day and she laughed when i told her darkness can consume the happiest of people.
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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 4:25 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Thanks!!! :)

Just curious,when you found out it was in print, did that happen when it was published on the website or after it had been up awhile?

Karlynne PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 1:29 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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thnx so much! i was absolutely surprised wen i got that email sayin it was goin to b published. and i'd love to check out sum of ur stuffs! :)

 

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 5:07 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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I really like this, it short but it's so well-written, and your note off to the side really spoke to me. That's how my friends are, too. Not taking anything seriously.

Check out my stuff if you have a chance, I'd love to hear from you. BTW: Congrats on making it into the print magazine... I'd kill for it. JK :) Would be nice though.