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Near Death

February 16, 2010
By PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..


I sit in class
and think about you.
I love you
with all I have.
My heart
has been broken.
I wish
I wouldn't
have ever spoken.
The pain hurts,
and I want it
to go away.
My heart portrays
each feeling I have.
You are my all,
and my love constitutes
the way I feel.
You can't believe
I would actually cry.
My eyes hurt,
and my heart burns.
I've fallen
for you bad-boy type,
and I don't want
to see any light.
I want
to be in
total darkness.
I love you,
and I can't harness
my love for you.
Give my heart back...
Please! I love you!!
My baby... I do!!!
I want you back.
My heart aches,
and you come to mind.
I need to be loved.
You're my love,
but I'm not yours.
You don't love me.
Give me
what I need.
A love with heed.
Baby,
you;re not coming
to relieve me
of a hurt heart.
Why don't I
go somewhere
and DIE!!!



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on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:40 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

Thanks.... Honestly, I wrote this when I was in a slightly bizarre moment...Like when you are raging with anger and it seems like no one cares about you...when you only want to be yourself... But thanks.. bunches =)

on Mar. 1 2010 at 7:23 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Um... I thought it was slightly bizarre and disoriented. Like the words to a goth punk songs instead of a flowing poem. On the other hand, I had read some of your other poems and they are fabulous. Obviously you have talent as proof in those.