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Elemental Love

January 31, 2010
By andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
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Favorite Quote:
when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.
-jimi hendrix-

Our words were sparks thrown around
Until the sparks crashed into eachother enough
To form a fully fledged fire
And the flames, defying air
Kept rising higher and higher
But with each word that made the flame grow,
I let my guard down more and more
My heart of steel transformed to one of fragile, thin, glass
Shaking in its place
Almost like it was waiting to break
And that one day, it finally did
The fire was too wild
Words and actions were furiously thrown around
This was a battle between fire, water, and air
The water crashed onto the fire,
Washing it out, making my world so gloomily dull and damp
And then the air carried away
The wispy remains of this now lost love
After so many months of the battle,
Water and air finally won
And now I’m stuck
With the debris of a lifetime

The author's comments:
I compared love to air, fire and water. because i think it compares well

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