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Too Late

January 11, 2010
By NorthernLites8 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
NorthernLites8 GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Always remember how beautiful your spirit is! ~Cody S.O. Haynes~


She was standing there
So sweet, so innocent
So real, but so unreal
A creation
Of my imagination
It’s too good
To be true
A trickery
A loud bang
Cries
Her soft, dying breath
The words, at last, escape my lips
“I am sorry”
But it is far, far
Too late

 


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on Jan. 24 2010 at 8:19 am
josiebelle SILVER, Waterford, Other
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loved it!! : D

on Jan. 22 2010 at 2:34 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:27 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Reality is almost always wrong.&quot;-House<br /> <br /> &quot;Don&#039;t worry when you feel something, worry when you don&#039;t.&quot;- SVU

awe, this is a great poem. your really good!