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A moment of Admiration

January 5, 2010
By ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"you know that place between asleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? thats where i love you peter pan, thats where i'll be waiting" Tinkerbell

While you wait amidst the rain
Cascading gently with your tears,
A salted window to your past
A fleeting smile dances across your eyes
A rainbow momentarily upon your lips;
I won’t attempt to understand

While you wait amidst the rain
You face upturned to illumined night
The moons meager attempt to pierce ever darkening shroud
Shadows stalk the light upon your face
Suppressing your laughter, a pealing bell
I don’t begin to comprehend

While you wait amidst the rain
A flicker of recognition, a single phrase
Disturbing the thoughts I thought forgotten,
The magic captured in radiant moonlight
My tears falling freely, ‘I thought I’d lost you’
I didn’t realize, there was no end

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Skeezics GOLD said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 7:19 pm
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.
Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski

Oh my gosh. This poem is amazing. You have to keep writing, you have a gift.