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Break Me Down

December 28, 2009
By a7xchibi BRONZE, Reno, Nevada
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Try to break me down
you cant break me
wont tell u how
please dont take me.

How can you do this?
how can you kill?
please tell me how
but you never will.

I cant stand this
trainwreck in my head
yeah you know what I want,
I want you dead.

Do you have to do this?
do you have to be so cruel?
you Nazi soldier,
you f****** fool.

© Preston M., Galesburg, IL

The author's comments:
this was for the poetry contest in my english class(i had to edit it to make it more "appropriate" but this is the original version) it is about the Holocaust. it won a prize! :)
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