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If You Were

December 18, 2009
By sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 255 comments

If you were wings,
I could soar high.
If you were life,
I would never want to die.
The simple things
can change our mind,
The story of love,
a book you cannot bind.
If you were the darkness,
I'd turn off the light.
If you were mine,
I'd hold on tight.
If you were a dream,
I would never awaken.
But you're just another risk
that will never be taken.

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on Dec. 24 2010 at 4:47 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

wow:D That was deep, i totally loved the wording.. Great Great job!! you should be proud

on Jun. 12 2010 at 2:38 pm
respecturself7 SILVER, Medina, New York
8 articles 0 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a natural law in life to settle.....I broke that law ~Katherine Hepburn
Love, Is the severest of mental diseases~U.K.
Spinning always spinning....when life puts me down I'll give you a call~respecturself7

I really like this! There seems to be a touch of fantasy to it that makes it intriguing. Nice job.

XCLover GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:23 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
18 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
"You only ever grow as a human being if you are outside your comfort zone." ~Percy Cerutti
"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

Whoa. What inspired this? It's fascinating. It seems so sweet and then the last line goes bitter. Great job!