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Who Would Of Thought?

December 11, 2009
By barbii09 BRONZE, Stonemountain, Georgia
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barbii09 BRONZE, Stonemountain, Georgia
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"You live and you learn but under no circumstances are you to regret"

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Who will come and rescue me
wen my prince herself leaves.
Who will come and console me
when my tears begins to drown me.


All of my life i searched for someone to standby me.
Who would of thought once she get here she would turn her back on me.

We had our share of ups and downs and says things we tend to regret. But never did i imagine that she would leave in such fret.

Am i to much for her to bear.
To much for her to have.
That my tears and anguish takes place of my smiles and laugh.

Did i ask for to much when i asked for her love?
Or is it me?
Is she the victim here?
Am i the problem?

Who would have thought a couple so happy.
Underneath it all they are buried with pain.
Maybe its all my fault,
Guess im the one to to blame

© Jessica P., Bethel Park, PA

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Was written about my exgirlfriend
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on Jan. 14 2010 at 2:38 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx