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A Thousand Miles

December 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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I wouldn't care how far I'd have to come,
I wouldn't walk a thousand miles I'd run.
I love you
I wouldn't slow down my pace,
Until I saw your pretty face.
I love you
And if I stumbled on my way to you,
I'd think of your smile to get me through.
I love you
I'd dream about you every day,
Until you were in my arms to stay.
I love you
And once I'm there I'll whisper in your ear,
The only words you'll ever hear...
I love you
So call my name and I'll be there,
Forever and always we will share.
I love you

© Edgard B., Coral Springs, FL

The author's comments:
I was thinking about a guy's love for his girl...and when he's the right guy he'll do anything for his love...and nowhere is too far for him to travel to see her pretty face...and nothing in the world can tear the two apart...it's precious...
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This article has 21 comments.

michelle98 SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2014 at 4:55 pm
michelle98 SILVER, Bellevue, Nebraska
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&quot;Life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what you&#039;re gonna get,&quot; Forest Gump

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This is my dream
Shahiro PLATINUM said...
on May. 15 2012 at 4:33 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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&quot;Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy.&quot; - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

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You know I bet this is exactly the kind of thing every girl wants from a guy! It's soooo sweet,most girls are suckers for sweet. Nicely written! Ps.please check out my work!
MoonHeart SILVER said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 3:57 pm
MoonHeart SILVER, PITTSBURGH, Pennsylvania
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! if only all guys were really that sweet. :(
RandomRanda GOLD said...
on Oct. 12 2011 at 9:03 am
RandomRanda GOLD, Paoli, Indiana
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Ill never improve, if i don&#039;t try <br /> I&#039;m Dancing for my life (im living my life). <br /> Im all me! NO ONE is changing me!

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LOVE it!!!!
D. said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 12:23 pm
AWWWW!!!!! How sweet!
EnochDreams GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:46 am
EnochDreams GOLD, Simi Valley, California
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I accidentally  subscribed to your stuff, but i really like it so far :) ... I have alot about relationships but they are pending!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 7:53 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you so much! You are such an amazing writer yourself!!!
justbe-3 said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:19 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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&quot;You live but once, you might as well be amusing.&quot; -Coco Chanel<br /> &quot;Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you&#039;re alive, it isn&#039;t.&quot; -Richard Bach <br /> &quot;Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love.&quot; -Einstein

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This is beyond cute, i just love your work! I tagged this as a favorite :) It's funny because about half of my favorites are your work. You are absolutely my favorite writer on this site. You have a lot of talent, keep writing!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 6:24 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Aw thank you sooo much;)
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 2:20 pm
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
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Love Is Nothing But A Dream&hearts;

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this is wonderfull!!! i feel the same way, good job i love it!!:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:35 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Awwww thank you so much!!!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 11:34 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank you:):)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 2:54 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

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*snif* that was sooo, *sigh* cute n sweet n nice n beautiful :))) aaa-hawww >.< ur a greattly talented writer!!! this was amazing..
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 29 2010 at 5:59 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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omg , I can totally relate . It really makes me think , awesome job :)

btw : I have 2 new poems up :) please check it out if you want to since you wanted to read more from me lolss , byeee (:

Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 9:25 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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You're welcome!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 11:18 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Aw Thank you:) I hope a guy will do the same for me too!
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD said...
on May. 30 2010 at 7:17 pm
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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&ldquo;I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing&rsquo;s gonna break my stride, &ldquo; &ndash;David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

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Awwww... that's sooooo sweet! Great job! i hope someday a guy would be willing to do anything for me!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2010 at 11:11 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Thank's...this is personally one of my fav poems...so I'm glad you like it also:)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2010 at 11:10 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Aww:) Thank u
Shells SILVER said...
on May. 21 2010 at 5:33 pm
Shells SILVER, Dixon, Wyoming
7 articles 6 photos 38 comments

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&ldquo;The dye has been cast. The decision has been made. I have stepped over the line. I won&rsquo;t look back, let up, slow down, or back away. My past is redeemed, my present makes sense, my future secure. I&rsquo;m done with low living, sight walking, small planning, colorless dreams, tamed visions, mundane talking, cheap living and dwarfed goals: I no longer need preeminence, prosperity, positions, promotions, or popularity. I don&rsquo;t have to be right, first, tops, recognized, praised, regarded or rewarded. I now live by faith, lean on His presence, walk with patience, live by prayer and labor with power. My face is set, my goal is Heaven, my road is narrow, my way is rough, my companions are few, my Guide is reliable, my mission clear. I cannot be bought, compromised, detoured, lured away, turned back, deluded or delayed. I will not flinch in the face of sacrifice, hesitate in the presence of adversary, negotiate at the table of the enemy, ponder at the pool of popularity or meander in the maze of mediocrity. I won&rsquo;t give up, shut up, let up, until I have stayed up, stored up, prayed up, paid up, and spoken up for the cause of Christ. I am a disciple of the lord Jesus Christ.&rdquo; - African martyred for Christ.

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This almost made me cry.  Very good job.