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Greatest of pain

December 5, 2009
By silver_tear_drops GOLD, Muskegon, Michigan
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one day you might see all the pain you brought me and how i loved you still ~Faith Frye~

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The greatest of pain
Shot threw you
Like a shot gun to your back
He left so suddenly
The gut wrenching pain
As you cry out
Goes so perfectly
As he walks away
She falls to her knees
Then to her face
He walks swiftly away
As her heart breaks
She cries out
The pain has become too much
Swallowing her whole
This beast untold
Taking her life
Through the darkness breaks
The dawning of a brand new day
She gets up
In the greatest of pain
She shines threw
To his dismay
No longer in
The greatest of pain

© Michael T., Letart, WV

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