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Changed

December 10, 2009
By Jackque BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
Jackque BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
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I don't know who you are,
Because every time I blink--
You change.
One moment life is great.
You are great and I am too;
Everything is just great.
But then,
Only one instant later.
One word or smile or heartbeat
Later...
Everything is not
So great
Anymore.
The great world we were in
Has shifted 180 degrees
Into something filled with
Hate.
Hate for life and hate for love.
Hate for everything that
Before was just great.
I watch the light
Melt from your eyes,
And shadows creep in.
So much can happen in a moment,
If you blink.



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on Sep. 14 2010 at 2:18 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

sure thingism.

Jackque BRONZE said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 10:51 pm
Jackque BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
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Wow, thank you so much.

on Sep. 9 2010 at 10:37 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

You know, some people butcher the technique of fragment sentences and two word sentences. You've clearly mastered the art of not doing that. this is really amazing captain. do your dance. i love you.

Jackque BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 2:39 am
Jackque BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
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Oh thank you so much!

on Jan. 1 2010 at 10:44 am
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

Wow I love this poem. It's awesome, keep writing!