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December 1, 2009
By MusicInMyHeart<3 PLATINUM, Lansdale, Pennsylvania
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MusicInMyHeart<3 PLATINUM, Lansdale, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Time will not dim the glory of their deeds...<br /> <br /> <br /> A heart afraid to love will never learn to dance...<br /> <br /> <br /> &quot;My mistake, I didn&#039;t know to be in love you had to fight to have the upper hand...&quot;

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Thank you for making my heart beat faster
It made me feel alive
Thank you for making me smile
It made me feel happy
Thank you for holding me close
It made me feel warm
Thank you for kissing me
It made me feel wanted
Thank you for saying ‘I love you’
It made me feel adored
Thank you for cherishing me
It made me feel special
Thank you for telling me your secrets
It made me feel close
Thank you for giving yourself to me
It made me feel whole
Thank you for taking me
It made me feel loved
Thank you for talking to me
It made me feel better
Thank you for being honest
It made me feel worse
Thank you for making me cry
It made me feel hurt
Thank you for breaking my heart
It made me feel wounded
Thank you for loving me
Now I feel nothing

© Brandon W., Redwood City, CA

The author's comments:
Everyone has a hard time in their life when they suddenly begin to feel pain in places so deep down inside, places you didn't know existed until they were broken.
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