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November 28, 2009
By rofl-copter SILVER, Trumbull, Connecticut
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rofl-copter SILVER, Trumbull, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"No ordinary wings I need, the sky itself will carry me"

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What else can I say?
After all this time
The ups and the downs
the good and the bad
What else can I say?

Are you still you
am I still me
After we've grown
What else can I say?

When you still bring
burgandy roses to tell me
I am more beautiful than I think
What else can I say?

When you still hold me like a bird
who fell from its nest
whenever I cry
What else can I say?

What else is there to say except
I do.

© Michelle W., Ada, MI

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Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 4:22 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
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&quot;the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be&quot; - unknown

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this is amazing, youve given me goosebumps i loved the imagery and the repition that you used it's really effective.
vampluv11 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 10:42 am
vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
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Go ask Alice.

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this was so beautifuL! if i wasn't sitting in the middle of the library right now, i might cry!