Stranger | Teen Ink


November 17, 2009
By je_suis_jolie SILVER, Cedar City, Utah
je_suis_jolie SILVER, Cedar City, Utah
6 articles 2 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"No one dies a virgin, the world screws us all."-Hailey Lamoreaux

She’s an outsider that life’s never met
Inside her mind there’s no forgive and forget
She keeps her identity locked up inside
Inside her shadow is where she will hide
She’d really like to meet herself, get to know life,
Inside her troubled mind all that lives is darkened strife
Her sillhouetted image lies within the stone
The wall starts to crumble, the sillhouette gone
Captive in a low bitter air
She looks for her shadow, but it isn’t there
Her mind wonders freely, her shadow it seeks
Little by little her identity sinks
Into the darkness, back into the stone
Up above the darkness her shadow wanders alone
She begins to dissapear, her lonely mind cages her
Typical day in the life of a stranger

The author's comments:
I got bored in math class one day and this is the product of that boredum! ;)

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on Nov. 29 2009 at 6:17 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

What a beautiful piece. I very much enjoyed it.

eosberg SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 10:04 pm
eosberg SILVER, Grand Island, New York
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest glory in living lies not in never falling, but in rising everytime we fall." -Nelson Mandela

wow this is very good!!! i like the way you write

rebelrose386 said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 9:17 am
rebelrose386, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
what other people say about you is none of your business

very well written it seems like the person doesnt really know who they are i do congratulate you on such a beautiful piece of work

HelloWorld said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 9:56 pm
i loved it. wow! you gave me goosebumps. this kind of reminds me of my own writing style. was there any specific person who inspired this? :-)

keep it up!