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November 7, 2009
By lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

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i set there and i wonder what your thinking.

are you thinking about me?
because ive been thinking about you all day long.

your what i want and what i need.

i dream about you every night.

i dont think those dreams are gonna change anytime soon.

because you are all i think about everyday of my life.

if you leave ill die inside,ill be crushed.

but if you stay ill be the happiest person in the world.

so please stay dont go.

i love you dont ever forget that!

The author's comments:
i was in 1st hour last year when i wrote this while i was lookin at the person i like at school
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.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 4:34 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This is anpther one of those pieces that is so easy to relate to. However, again, I think it could be better still if you go more in-depth about what you feel. Describe what you think of him and what makes him so special and why he would want you. What makes you special makes your writing special. Also, you could try to work that in here somewhere about how you're a great writer so he should want you above anyone else.