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We Never Were

October 24, 2009
By lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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lph13 PLATINUM, Enid, Oklahoma
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“Life is one big road with lots of signs. So when you riding through the ruts, don't complicate your mind. Flee from hate, mischief and jealousy. Don't bury your thoughts, put your vision to reality . Wake Up and Live!” Bob Marley

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we never were together and never will be,but i still love you and still want you here.

you are everything i always wanted.

i know that all you want to be is friends.

so if thats all you want.

i will keep on tryin but not as hard.

but you know i will never stop loving you no matter what.

i hope you never leave and always stay with me.
forever and always love you.

The author's comments:
i wrote this after this boy i asked out said no to me but i do still love him
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In_Love_Loved PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:11 pm
In_Love_Loved PLATINUM, Concord, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;ve lost my faith in so many things but I still believe in you.&quot; -Sanctus Real

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Okay... So far this seems to be my favorite piece from you. I reeeeaaalllyyy like this. Keep writing?
Heatherr-feather GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 5:19 pm
Heatherr-feather GOLD, Coquitlam, Other
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&quot; When you give it all up, you get it all. You end up losing absolutely nothing, other than some well cherished opinions and ideas. &quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Dennis Genpo Merzel

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simple yet, completely relatable, nice work!
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 23 2009 at 4:31 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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This piece is so so relatable! I think eveyone has been here and felt this way. What you could maybe do to make it even more powerful is to describe this feeling that everyone has had with words and emotions that not everyone can fully unserstand. It makes a piece so much more powerful when you have to read it a few times and think really hard about the meaning before you can really grasp the concept. You might try describing how you know he doesn't love you. Like in the way he looks at you vs the way he looks at her.