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Just You

October 22, 2009
By sockmnks BRONZE, Massena, New York
sockmnks BRONZE, Massena, New York
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Do you remember
When it's just you and me.
No one else
as far as I see.
Our eyes meet,
I swear it's so real,
By all the moments
and the way you make me feel.
Your eyes like the twilight sky,
Makes me feel so alive.
Wish we could take that chance and fly.
Do you remember
When it’s just you and me.
My heart begins to race,
Doodling hearts I begin to trace.
You don't say anything,
Nothing at all.
Just one look,
And I begin to fall.
We’re so innocent
With everything we do,
Wanting this to be more than true.
Being with you is like a dream,
Much more than it really seems.
I want
To give you my heart
To give you the ability
To break it all apart.
Catch me…
I cannot do it alone,
Without you
It’s a cyclone.
Think of me,
As if I'm the one,
There's nothing left
When the stories done.
Make this…
Your fairytale ending,
We’re not little anymore
So let’s stop pretending.

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Avalynn BRONZE said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 8:35 pm
Avalynn BRONZE, Monrovia, California
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i can totally relate this! thanks for writing, its a great poem and i especially like the last 2 lines...

"We're not little anymore

so lets stop pretending."

nice job! (can you please check out my poem called Crescendo in about a week or so? thank you :)

on Nov. 2 2009 at 1:02 pm
cutelilpoet01 GOLD, Jackson, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
" I may be selfish, impatient, a little insecure and at times hard to handle, but if you can't handle me at my worst, you sure don't deserve me at my best." Marilyn Monroe

I love this poem and the story it tells!

on Oct. 30 2009 at 2:56 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

I love the emotion and the image you have portrayed here.

-Please read the writhings I have posted on here I think you would really enjoy them =]

on Oct. 30 2009 at 1:46 pm
WootSaba BRONZE, Round Lake, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"And when I shall die, take him and cut him up in little stars,and he will make the face of heaven so fine that all the world will fall in love with night and pay no worship to the garish sun. "

Wow, this was amazing. You put my poems to shame. Good job.

on Oct. 29 2009 at 4:38 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

this is awesome. i luv the emotion and the passion you put in the poem. hope to see more from you!

akrr2011 said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 9:17 am
akrr2011, Hamersville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Skin is beautiful so dont ruin it with scars because life isnt as beautiful for once life becomes beautiful to you again your skin wont be so beautiful anymore"

I absolutly love it <3

Exactaly what i needed to help me get through a tough time right now.

Thank you,

Keep writing.