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Empty Empty Empty Halls

October 10, 2009
By LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.


Walking down the halls
Of a now empty world;
Without You.

There you are,
Here I am,
Together;
Never Again.


The author's comments:
I wrote this when me and my ex broke up,I hated having to even pass by him in the halls...

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on Jan. 30 2010 at 4:05 pm
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I agree that this is a good poem because it's short but gets the point across. good job!

on Jan. 15 2010 at 9:20 pm
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.

VVV Why Thank You :)

on Jan. 13 2010 at 2:35 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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I like this poem alot. I love how it's so short but still gets the point across. Great imagery! Come and check out my work if you would like. Keep up the good work!

on Jan. 3 2010 at 10:23 pm
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.

Ima Cool Kidd :)