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Missed My Chance

September 28, 2009
By BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
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I see this girl sitting in front of me.
She smiles and gives kind gestures to me.
She smells the way angels ought to smell.

I stare into her eyes and think real deeply.
She still looks at me and then I freeze.
I can’t move all I can do is staring.
Gosh what beautiful brown hair.

I think real deeply as times go by.
And wish I don’t have to say goodbye.
I look at her still dumbstruck in passion
Gosh what a what beautiful eyes

I see before a goddess of multitudes.
Then she smiles and I froze
Gosh what a beautiful smile.

I look at here every moment I spare.
Still I freeze I loose every moment I spare.
Then the bus stops and there,
There I lost my chance.
The chance of possible love…..

The author's comments:
I wrote this after seeing this beatiful girl on the bus

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on Oct. 19 2009 at 1:55 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe thats sweet...you shoulda said hey to her:(