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Illusion of a killer's mind

October 4, 2009
By Cecile SILVER, Reston, Virginia
Cecile SILVER, Reston, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep the lies alive"


Fearing the slightest slip
Legs were calmly dragged on the floor
Voices, hushed in the silent lullaby
Eyes wandered where none could see

The doors were locked
The rain heavily poured
While its numb fragrance
Flew through small airways

Breathing was difficult
Deprived from the sun
The rays
And the heat

Minds were fogged by disturbed ideas
Uncontrollable actions took part of daily lives
A fool’s lifeless appearance
Became one’s miserable instinct
Others’ were his prey with a single glare

A slight misstep of a cold phrase
Spoken in mind twisting confusion
The heart dies and actions lie awake

The strong were killed
While the weak falter
When the mind conquers the body,
Distress accumulates
In the illusion of a killer’s mind.


The author's comments:
Let your imagination wander... then try to find some sense of it after saying "What the hell"
Write for the hell of it.

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on Oct. 12 2009 at 9:15 pm
MadAsAHatter GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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That is really cool. I like it a lot. so much poetry is the same that its awesome to read something that's so different

on Oct. 12 2009 at 3:01 pm
theSilenced Whispers SILVER, Centerville, Ohio
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Really makes you think in depth. I like it!

Cecile SILVER said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 12:41 pm
Cecile SILVER, Reston, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Keep the lies alive"

lol thanks

on Oct. 12 2009 at 12:17 am
LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill me only, will make me stronger in my head..." Papa Roach, Kick In The Teeth

that was really good! i loved it!!!