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Fading Friendship

September 21, 2009
By CandieApple PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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CandieApple PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
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The world is a stage, and we are merely players- Shakespeare (at least it goes something like that!!)

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Now that Hannah's gone,
the blue eyed, brown haired girl, has faded.
Which leaves us with,
the blonde haired, bubbly girl,
and the brown haired, sarcastic,
funny girl.
We're left standing in the dark.
No matter how happy we seem,
there's a hole in both our hearts.

© Vania M., Voorhees, NJ

The author's comments:
It's a true story about my friends. I tried my best and put it all out there! I hope you understand the true meaning. :)
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CandieApple PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 6:04 pm
CandieApple PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
29 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is a stage, and we are merely players- Shakespeare (at least it goes something like that!!)

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Yeah, I know. I was wondering if I should change those lines, but decided i should keep them. I gave this to my friend and thought i should post this up here.
hannahbee7 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:10 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
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"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

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This one is really good, the beginging was kind of confusing but the last three lines were the best