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Car Crash

September 19, 2009
By Chris~Ortiz BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
Chris~Ortiz BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Silent is the world

As the sound barrier breaks

Demolished by his reckless speed

Diving, dodging, swirving through lanes

5:30 traffic has no authority on him

He becomes a speeding bullets, traveling towards his next target

The beckoning scarlet lights plead him to halt

He hears them not, but views the semi ahead

Seconds become years, but it's still not enough time to move

The collision of sparks and oil explode violently around him

But silent stayed the world

The author's comments:
this is the revised version of one I sent in not to long ago

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on Oct. 6 2009 at 9:20 pm
Chris~Ortiz BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I don't think I'm going to be in the magizine at this point :/ but here's hoping otherwise!

on Sep. 28 2009 at 9:16 pm
Chris~Ortiz BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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Comments and critisism are loved ^^