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Who Am I

September 17, 2009
By choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken


Am I the girl in the corner
Am I the girl everybody loves
Am I the girl everybody hates
Am I the girl that is bubbly

Am I the overachiever
Am I the prep
Am I the goth
Am I the nerd
Am I the misundersrood
Am I the jock

Do I sit at home
Do I hang out with friends
Do I chill with my boyfriend
Do I have people do stuff for me
Do I sit in the back of class and read

I am the girl who hangs out with friends
Iam the girl reading in the back of class
I am the prep
I am the girl in the corner
I am the girl writing this poem
I am bubbly


I am ME


The author's comments:
This is about just being different. How we can be multiple things and not get judged. I wrote this because it expresses who I am

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on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:38 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thank you so much for your comments. i appreciate them

Oracion SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 9:40 am
Oracion SILVER, Muskogee, Oklahoma
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fiction's not much different from Reality, sometimes people just forget to look for the magic in their own lives

I really like the subject of the poem. It's well written. I especially like your use of anaphora (lol, I learned that word in my Language and Composition class). But on topic, this is really good.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 8:21 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

Thank you everybody for your comments.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 9:59 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If it comes out of the lion&#039;s mouth...it will be on the test.&quot;<br /> -Mr. Bala

I like this poem a lot. It's very pretty, and I like how it's kind of anti-label.

savina GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 4:45 am
savina GOLD, Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Dont try to bull crap a bull crapper becuase they know all about the bull crapping&quot;.- my ap enviromental science teacher

sorry about the spelling in the beginning, my brother was messing with me.

savina GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 4:43 am
savina GOLD, Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Dont try to bull crap a bull crapper becuase they know all about the bull crapping&quot;.- my ap enviromental science teacher

I likemthis poem alot...my favorite part is at the end when you say 'I am'

on Sep. 28 2009 at 2:58 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I really like this poem. It says a lot about you, how you can be different people and have different personalities.

on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:37 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

srry i wrote in all caps i was having an off day and keep up the good work

on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:35 am
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
This is such an amazing poem. Really says much about you. Your personality and feelings. Great Job. God Bless

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:43 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thnx. the words just came to me

on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:42 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

OMG I LOVE IT IM A GUY I AM NOT A PREP I AM THE MISSUNDERSTOOD BUT I READ IN THE BACK OF THE CLASS I AM BUBLY I HANG IWHT MY FIRENDS