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I Would Have to Settle

August 30, 2009
By FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."


In my dream last night
I dreamt
I kissed a man in purple;

He had plastic bags over his lips
And I had to nibble them away,
As his fingers (made of chalk)
Left white streaks in my hair.

‘Full moon sways’
Like the cradle of a mother’s arms
On the coldest winter day
(In a faraway place);
Scarves and stockings in dressers--
“I have always been waiting for you,”
He said.


The author's comments:
...for something less.

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on Apr. 1 2023 at 6:41 am
Lucy-G-Turpin SILVER, Palma, Other
6 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a joke"

Lovely

on Jun. 16 2022 at 1:01 pm
AztroWorkz BRONZE, Bellingham, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 23 comments
I feel like I both understand and can't comprehend this poem. I like it.

on Jan. 1 2017 at 1:51 am
maddielouwho88 SILVER, Ada, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Too low they build who build beneath the stars." --Edward Young, "Night Thoughts"

I love the plastic bags over the lips-- such a unique, yet beautiful sensation

on Jul. 16 2016 at 11:43 pm
ayam_maya BRONZE, Kenmore, Washington
1 article 0 photos 5 comments
Like someone else said, great imagery! Very surreal Also, like another someone else said, I don't get it but I definitely like it :)

on Apr. 20 2016 at 8:17 pm
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

SAME THO XD

on Nov. 29 2015 at 6:59 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

I love the imagery!!

on Dec. 30 2014 at 10:55 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

Wow! I'm a loss for words right now, but really great job detailing an imagery-based dream.

on Aug. 28 2014 at 11:38 am
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ― Mary Oliver

I love the imagery when you wrote that his fingers left white streaks in your hair. I like how this was so visual, and surreal. It reminds me of my own dreams. I can relate. 

on Sep. 16 2013 at 2:03 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

I don't get it, but I like it (:

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 8 2013 at 3:51 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

I don't know why but it gave me chills.

rachboosh said...
on Feb. 7 2013 at 7:03 pm
rachboosh, Atlanta, Georgia
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love this. very surreal.