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Occulded Oasis

November 8, 2022
By JonahHChang SILVER, Cupertino, California
JonahHChang SILVER, Cupertino, California
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Oh cactus, great solitary sentinel

Your spiky skin and inimical thorns a wonder

An awe bewildering all that breathes 

Beneath barbs both bold and belligerent

Is your core a tender heart? 

Is your coat the hostile part? 

What sweetness do you protect?

What do your quills reflect? 


The author's comments:

This piece uses a cactus as a metaphor for people, in that someone may be one way on the outside, and another way on the inside.


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on Nov. 10 2022 at 1:53 pm
JonahHChang SILVER, Cupertino, California
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Hey all. As you can see, there is a typo in the title. Sorry! Fixed here: TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/1171313/Occluded-Oasis