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Deflated

September 19, 2022
By huffytun BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
huffytun BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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A yellow ball, so battered, so worn

Reminds me of my soul so very torn.

It had been touched very much

Form so warped, bent, and such. 


I gazed at it sadly, remembering my past.

All those good moments that didn't quite last. 

I found that the ball seemed something like me.

So used and so broken, it was almost ugly. 


Deflated and still, so quiet and sad

Yet somehow I smiled. It wasn’t that bad.

The ball was resilient, so stubborn and strong

It made me feel like I truly belonged.


The author's comments:

This piece was written on a whim after my English teacher jokingly said I could submit a poem instead of an assignment for class. Turns out, she was serious about it! So, seeing my yellow squishy stress ball on my desk that had been passed around and dirtied by the hands of many peers, friends, and even the floor, I decided to make it the subject of my poem. I hope you enjoy!


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Afra ELITE said...
on Sep. 22 2022 at 9:24 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Spectacularly written!!! Keep it up!!!👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻