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I have been obedient

March 17, 2022
By Lucy-G-Turpin SILVER, Palma, Other
Lucy-G-Turpin SILVER, Palma, Other
6 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a joke"


I have been obedient,

standing alone.

In a city I do not

remember at all.

I held my hands together.

I stand tall.

I have been obedient,

but I am lost.

They have left me,

crying alone.

Hearing voices

that are not my own.


The author's comments:

I was lost once. It was not a good experience.

If you ever find yourself lost, don't be alarmed, go to the police and they will be able to help you.


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on Dec. 1 2022 at 5:49 am
Inspira_me BRONZE, Palma, Other
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OMG this poem is amazing, it describes the situation and feelings of the author in a great way

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on Mar. 19 2022 at 10:20 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This poem made us feel as if we were in it and we were the person who were lost...Simple diction makes this poem amazing!!!👏🏻 👏🏻👏🏻