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HAVE YOU GONE TOO FAR

February 2, 2022
By aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
32 articles 2 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
where words fail music speaks
success is a journey, not a destination

when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE

If you are able to look yourself
in the mirror every day
with the decisions that you make,
that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ

Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK

haters will say what they want, but their hate will
never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER

If you follow your dreams,
it means you follow your heart.
if you do follow your heart,
I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION


I remember days we spent together were joyful
and now I'm here alone
I don't know if I'll see you soon but,
I feel that my life is going through a lack of mellow
I prayed for things I don't belong but
I feel like I've lost my own
but in reality, I knew I owned your love but now
how much far away have you gone?
that's why adoring someone ain't easy but if you
start, it would be hard letting go

Sometimes we make memories in things, places, or anything
and lose em' like we never cared
but after the people who we made memories with
becomes a memory we won't be able to bear
we should know that loneliness hurts more than betrayal on earth
and there will be no lack of people to
find the mistakes you've done from birth


people might come and go in your life
but the memories made by then
persist in your mind, though it's good or not
I know that you have gone to a place darker or brighter 
that I can't follow
now when I turn back to see you I realize that you've gone too far
and I don't know where you are!
I'll try to sedate my heart with no war
and if God could forbid you from
leaving me there is nothing more I could care


The author's comments:

I wrote this poem for my grandfather who passed away in 2021...may his soul rest in peace in heaven 


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on Feb. 20 at 12:14 am
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
32 articles 2 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
where words fail music speaks
success is a journey, not a destination

when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE

If you are able to look yourself
in the mirror every day
with the decisions that you make,
that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ

Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK

haters will say what they want, but their hate will
never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER

If you follow your dreams,
it means you follow your heart.
if you do follow your heart,
I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION

@CaliFranceGurl648 thank you soo much...

on Feb. 15 at 12:44 pm
CaliFranceGurl648 GOLD, San Diego, California
11 articles 1 photo 125 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I am a California girl, born and raised, so flip-flops and cutoff shorts are my go-to look."

– Meghan Markle

This poem is so emotional but well-written...Aalaa, rocking as always!

on Feb. 14 at 8:44 pm
aalaazah1 PLATINUM, Colombo, Other
32 articles 2 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
where words fail music speaks
success is a journey, not a destination

when you feel your best, everybody else can feel it too - ARIANA GRANDE

If you are able to look yourself
in the mirror every day
with the decisions that you make,
that's where power starts - SELENA GOMEZ

Before you judge people judge yourself - ZAYN MALIK

haters will say what they want, but their hate will
never stop you from chasing your dream- JUSTIN BIEBER

If you follow your dreams,
it means you follow your heart.
if you do follow your heart,
I don't think you can go wrong- CELINE DION

@afra thank you...

Afra DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 12 at 9:11 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
79 articles 7 photos 1667 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

@aalaazah1, I felt all the emotion and the sentiments you put in the poem and eventually turned on the waterworks...🥺🥺🥺
May his soul rest in peace in heaven...😢😢😢