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2022 Traditions Contest: Far Into Rural Minnesota MAG

January 30, 2022
By SydneyOdile SILVER, Carbondale, Illinois
SydneyOdile SILVER, Carbondale, Illinois
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If you follow the rough asphalt and rock

Far into rural Minnesota,

Past the turkey farms and fields of corn,

A cabin sits on a low-lying property.

 

If you follow the property to where water laps against lanky stalks,

Smelling of lemon and thyme,

You will hear the growl of a floating engine

Send loon to the air.


If you follow the loon to the end of the dock,

Until you’re steps from dancing on the water,

The radiance of the sun 

Will refract off nature’s mirror.

 

And if you look into earth’s seeing pool,

You will see

The cobalt sky and pear-colored grass.

The elegant birch and ink-black squirrels,


Far into rural Minnesota.


The author's comments:

This is my mom's cousin's cabin that has been in their family for generations. During COVID, we grew closer with their family. Last summer, when we were able to get together, they invited us to share their family tradition. I felt relaxed for the first time in over a year. It was a gift. 


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Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 6 2022 at 12:12 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Nice one!!! Love it!!!★★★
BTW, even I got more closer with my family during Covid and I realised how much they meant to me!!!