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Three Moons

September 5, 2021
By SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]


The first moon is silver. 

The second is gold. 

The third moon is of mist and smoke and shining lights. 

The first moon is treasure.

The second is priceless.

The third moon is dew on cobwebs and lamplight on wet streets.

The first moon is joy.

The second is love.

The third moon is heartbreak and smiles and laughter in graveyards.

The first moon is healing.

The second is empathy.

The third moon is fleeing and loving and lost leaves in the wind.

The first moon is truth.

The second is wisdom.

The third is lies and imagination and truer than life.


The author's comments:

this really reminds me of LydiaQs poems. maybe the third moon is her.


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on Sep. 25 2021 at 10:16 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

oh my wow this hardly resembles the edited version!

on Sep. 8 2021 at 1:44 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

my picky english teache liked it too.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Sep. 7 2021 at 10:46 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
142 articles 42 photos 1009 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let the disappointments pass
Let the laughter fill your glass
Let your illusions last until they shatter.
Whatever you might hope to find
Among the thoughts that crowd your mind
There won't be many that ever really matter.
But take good care of your mother
And remember to be kind
When the pain of another will serve you to remind."
--Jackson Browne

OH MY GOODNESS! Thank you so much so much I get it now...thank you so much. I'm gonna print this out:)