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Going Home MAG

June 15, 2021
By zizhengwilliamliu BRONZE, Sugar Land, Texas
zizhengwilliamliu BRONZE, Sugar Land, Texas
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Beyond the gateway, 

a cow drains herself 

to nourish her children & 

today we are mixing 

butter with bare hands. 

Salt constantly nips 

on my tongue 

so wherever I’m at, 

I know it’s not home. 

The wind, strongest at 

dawn, whips around me 

to remedy its own & 

crafts the butter before 

it gets to my throat. 

Tonight, I am constructing 

a home: with its thick walls made of hands and its rooftop of  

salty butter. 

When the rooftop melts 

and drips onto my tongue, the hands strengthen their grasp 

until I realize 

that my very own home 

has tried to strangle me. 


The author's comments:

Zizheng is a student from Texas. When he's not writing, he loves snapping photos of the world around him with his Canon Rebel camera.


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on Sep. 25 2021 at 3:13 pm
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

This is really good, and well done for mag

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on Jun. 17 2021 at 10:10 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

This is a profound and confusing poem.