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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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on Oct. 28 2022 at 5:30 pm
Lolarosemary1 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Somedays I need the music & somedays I need the lyrics." - Author Unknown

This is so amazing. I can really feel that. I can feel your pain.

on May. 9 2022 at 11:12 am
nataliebeal0605 BRONZE, Commercial Point, Ohio
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This poem is really freaking good! It definitely hit home but I love your poem.

Zayy said...
on May. 8 2022 at 10:24 am
Zayy, Montgomery, Alabama
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why did you write like this

on May. 6 2022 at 12:10 pm
Christine001 BRONZE, Xi'an, Other
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I love this part the most
'Your smile entices me
Your eyes invite me
Your laugh excites me
Your cries break me
Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was'
and also this
'But you are my past
And someone else’s future
You are not mine
And I need to forget you'
OMG it is soooooo cute!!!

ASH2960 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 28 2022 at 11:34 pm
ASH2960 BRONZE, Plymouth, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I have failed over and over again in my life, and thats why I succeed."<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Michael Jordan

That is amazing.

on Apr. 21 2022 at 8:44 pm
emiedawson1 BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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this was so cool!! i totally felt this and i think it was amazing. this caught my eye. love it so much!!!

on Apr. 18 2022 at 2:25 pm
Night-Rain GOLD, Alma, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Do the best you can until you know better. Then when you know better, do better" - Maya Angelou

This poem is a very deep and emotional poem that makes whoever reads it feel the way the author felt while writing it. Good job!

on Apr. 12 2022 at 8:34 am
Unknown4200 BRONZE, Springboro, Pennsylvania
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This is a great poem

AlanCole4 said...
on Mar. 1 2022 at 4:51 pm
AlanCole4, El Paso, Texas
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This poem was deep and heart touching. I felt like I was feeling the emotions the author felt. It was a great poem, but I think line 17 should be removed. But other than that, the poem and the author was excellent!!

AlanCole4 said...
on Mar. 1 2022 at 4:41 pm
AlanCole4, El Paso, Texas
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Great literature, maybe remove the line where it says feel your touch before you are my past

on Feb. 24 2022 at 4:41 pm
sportymud_15 BRONZE, Gettysburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
It Will All Workout

Wow, the way you worded that ... BEAUTIFUL. And also very relatable, great job!

on Feb. 24 2022 at 3:06 am
capricorn2007 SILVER, Berryville, Arkansas
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WOW That is deep I love how you put the image of it all in my head.

on Jan. 25 2022 at 11:57 am
Amaya_ohara12, America, Arizona
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This is very good and it gives great detail!!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Afra ELITE said...
on Dec. 29 2021 at 10:07 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This poem made me walk in your shoes at the moment I was reading it... Wonderful work...Very well-written, buddy...

boliver said...
on Dec. 14 2021 at 1:13 pm
boliver, Huntersville, North Carolina
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The writer is a true genius! What great work!

on Dec. 14 2021 at 8:38 am
kshap12534431, Huntersville, North Carolina
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This poem was wonderful because it was very easy to feel the emotions of the poet while reading the poem.

JulianHoops said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 11:23 pm
JulianHoops, Harrisburg, North Carolina
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What I like about this poem is how passionate the writer is about love.

on Dec. 13 2021 at 7:44 pm
TTV-CleverKiller-YT, Concord, New Hampshire
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I loved how the reader presented this poem and the emotions that were described

MiaHilst said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 4:27 pm
MiaHilst, Davidson, North Carolina
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I loved this poem because I could feel in my bones how deep it was and I can tell based on all the powerful emotions that were portrayed that whoever this is about really hurt you. I'm sorry that happened and I hope you feel better soon!

sbrooks123 said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:39 pm
sbrooks123, Cornelius, North Carolina
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I really like how the emotions were described in this poem.