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I Want to Kill Myself MAG
I want to kill myself
In an unexpected way.
Murder all the badness
But let the nice things stay.
Assassinate the hate
That's buried in my heart.
Rid myself of evil
To let the goodness start.
I'll slaughter all the judgment
That's darkening my mind.
Massacre revulsion
That makes my spirit blind.
Slay all of the pride
That's commandeered my soul.
Open up my head
And let the love unroll.
I do not wish to die,
Please, don't get me wrong,
I'll just cast away the demons
To a Hell where they belong.
'Cause when burdened with the issue
Of whom I wish to be,
I want people to look back
With pleasant memories of me.
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Congratulations on the Editor's Choice! :D
Gotta say I really liked reading this and can completely relate to it. I think most people can. The Rhyme Scheme is well suited, and my only criticism is the beginning of the 5th stanza.
You shouldn't told the reader point blank you didn't want to literally die. That message should have been made clear through your imagery and figurative language. I understood that message before I read those lines, however I think it takes alot away from the poem's meaning and impact on the reader.
Its a great poem and you should be proud. It's just something to think about for future poems :)
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