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Remember Me?

August 8, 2011
By BriBear143 BRONZE, New Brighton, Minnesota
BriBear143 BRONZE, New Brighton, Minnesota
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"Duck and covor..it always works"


Remember me...
From fourteen short years ago?
You said you would always be there,
But I guess that wasn't so.

From time to time I wonder,
If I look or act like you,
I hope I don't smile like you smiled,
Because your smile was untrue.

Did it hurt you when you left me,
Or did you just not care?
Did you ever think to call me,
No...and that's not fair.

Did you ever think how it is for me,
To never have had a dad?
Do you care about how I feel,
That it makes me really sad.

Remember me...
From fourteen years ago?
Hey, I'm your daughter,
The one you'll never know.



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on Aug. 14 2011 at 10:55 pm
BriBear143 BRONZE, New Brighton, Minnesota
2 articles 3 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Duck and covor..it always works"

Thanks:) I'll totallyy check out your stuff!

Panirap SILVER said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 7:28 pm
Panirap SILVER, Plano, Texas
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An old friend will help you move. A good friend will help you move a dead body. - Jim Hayes

Hey,

Not bad! I like this one the best :)

Vey nice job with the sentence structure, and the way the feelings got conveyed.

keep writing :)

see if you can check my stuff out! i appreciate it!

Thanks!