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The Bitter Love Story

June 18, 2011
By ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over,
Smile because it happened."

-Dr. Suess

She was in love with those eyes,
Those bright baby blues,
They were always a surprise,
Always hiding important clues.

He thought that she was hot,
Said she had a “rocking body,”
Wanted to know if she smoked pot,
Or if she was a girl who was naughty.

She was in love with that boy,
He was so caring and so sweet,
The way he never played coy,
Just made her heart skip a beat.

He didn't listen to what she said,
Didn't pay any attention at all,
Thinking about stuff in his head,
Wouldn't notice if she took a fall.

She was in love with that smile,
That amazing beautiful shine,
It made her day worth while,
Made her think “He will be mine.”

He liked the way she flipped her hair,
Thinking about how she was a cutie,
Never even giving any thought or care,
Always just wanting to tap that booty.

She was in love with his heart,
It was so golden, pure, and true,
Never doubting it from the start,
Knowing that he thought it too.

He never gave her a chance,
Thought it didn't even matter,
Just wanted to get in her pants,
Never thought she could shatter.

She never knew that before,
Never thought about it much,
Now she wants him even more,
Still craves his player touch.

He released her from his mind,
Thinks she needs to go away,
Wants to go back an rewind,
So she would leave him alone today.

She knows the pain he brings,
Now she wishes she could die,
Wishes she could spread wings,
And learn how she could fly.

He didn't realize what he did,
Never knew she could be in love,
Just acting like a stupid kid,
And now she's in heaven above.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Dec. 15 2011 at 6:18 pm
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

I absolutely love this because it's sooo true. Us girls fall hard while the guy doesn't really care, and when he doesn't need us anymore  we crash. You have real talent, keep writing.

Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 5:01 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I had this type of poisonous relationship before, luckily I got out of it before it turned to anything more than just his perverted flirting. Getting out of it was one of the best decisions of my life. I love this poem, but it almost made me cry; it's brillant.

Maybe you could check out my stuff sometime? Please?

on Oct. 16 2011 at 10:15 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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Ouch! That hurts a little to read. She died for superficial love. That sucks. I'll give it 3 stars cuz I didn't really like the idea but it flowed well. Now you have to read my poems.