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The Weeks Go Bye

November 15, 2010
By echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
echome94 PLATINUM, Daleville, Virginia
32 articles 3 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
When the world around me ceases to exist and then i will open up and let a cruel man like you in


Week 1
i do not speak his language
I do not understand his terms
He says my hips are like a rocking boat
What is that supposed to mean?
Week 2
I now understand some of this man
I know what he thinks of me
I know all that he sees
He picked me because of my womanly curves
Week 3
I dont even like this man
He follows me around
He drools like a child and pants like a dog
God he's such a pig, no worse a fat stinky hog!
Week 4
He told me that he loved me
I turned my head away
He told me that he needed me
I got up and walked away
Week 5
He doesnt seem the same to me
Well not anymore
I now adore his eyes and his smile
But he can be such a bore!
Week 6
I dont get it
I barely know this man
But i think i love him
But his words are empty and hold no good deeds
Week 7
I said yes when he asked me out
And today i found out his ex girlfriend wants to fight
Oh please this just usnt right
She isnt even his anymore
Week 8
My head hurts
He visits me every day
How was he supposed to know
How crazy was Loraine?
Week 9
I am back in school
And all of a sudden i am so cool
Becuase i took the hit and then took her out
Even though my looks expired long ago
I am now desired
Week 10
He asked me to be his girlfriend
I said yes and now i wear his class ring
It sits happily on a short chain
Tight around my neck
And happily sparkles in the light
Proudly proclaiming despite the bruises on my skin i won the fight

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on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:14 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Hm...this is and interesting piece. Very well written, just has a couple minor spelling errors but that happens when typing. I like the newness of each week, the first 5 are my favorite :)