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Angel with Wings

September 22, 2010
By RedRosePoet GOLD, Fort Myers, Florida
RedRosePoet GOLD, Fort Myers, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Poetry is like a red rose: beautiful and dangerous


He says i fell from the sky with wings of golden light
That when he saw me he died
That when i kissed him i brought him back to life.
I made it right when he'd been wronged.
He said his heart was black until he saw me and he was cleansed of his lies as if he'd said goodbye to his life of crime.



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on Oct. 5 2010 at 6:53 pm
RedRosePoet GOLD, Fort Myers, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Poetry is like a red rose: beautiful and dangerous

he key elements of a ballad is telling a story. thats what im doing. sorry you dont approve.

on Oct. 4 2010 at 4:53 pm
lumpkins BRONZE, Plainfeild, Connecticut
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i am sorry i found this to be mis leading and missing key elements to be a ballad

on Oct. 3 2010 at 10:52 pm
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
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wow, love how it creates a duo of fantasy and real life in the same experience, rate mine?