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Ballad of the Immortals

August 21, 2010
By bookwormchick BRONZE, Wauconda, Illinois
bookwormchick BRONZE, Wauconda, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon, if you miss you'll land among the stars." -Unknown


Whisper me wonders
Whisper no lies.
Whisper me words,
But make me no ties.

Give to me life,
Give to me breath.
Give to me love,
But give me no death.

Offer me freedom,
Offer me will.
Offer me comfort,
But don't make me kill.

Order me nowhere,
Order me strait.
Your order means nothing,
For you can't dictate.

For we are immortals,
Healthy and strong.
And you are but mortals,
Who sing of our song.
So look to your heavens,
Look to your life.
Bow to us deities,
Or we shall bring strife.


The author's comments:
just a little blurb i wrote while listening to music an thinking of all the gods of the past.

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cmaday said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 6:23 pm
Ohhhh Rosie! Beyond awesome!! Beyond a five!

on Sep. 16 2010 at 10:48 am
Annibonny DIAMOND, Evanston, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes life takes a path that is hard to walk on, so all you have to do is put on your hiking boots.

Great choice of words! It really flows! 5 out of 5 definitly!!