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I Wish, I Wish.

October 1, 2009
By carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

I wish I heard your laugh right now.
Your smile, I really miss.
I loved the way you cured my fears,
and made it better with a kiss.

I wish I saw your face right now.
Pictures aren't the same.
I loved the way you held me close,
the way you said my name.

I wish you'd come and see me now.
You're way too far away.
I loved the way you made me smile.
Please come back and stay.

I wish you knew how much I cared.
I guess you'll never know.
I loved the way you cared for me.
I'll never let you go.

The author's comments:
I really missed a friend. I swear, he was just a friend. lol. This is not a boyfriend poem, though it may seem so.

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on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:07 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."

This is super good!! It does seem like a boyfriend poem. I love it.

on Dec. 29 2011 at 11:00 am
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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Ahhhhhhhhh I love this poem soOoooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can sort of relate to it. Please look at my poem, too!

on Aug. 19 2011 at 9:27 pm
Stefegg PLATINUM, Maysville, Missouri
21 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world."

I can relate to this. It is really well written with good meter. (:

on Apr. 9 2011 at 5:01 pm
smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
10 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!" "If it is to be, it is up to me." "I am comfortable being uncomfortable!" -Steve Nash

That is a really good poem! i know how you feel!

on Jan. 1 2011 at 2:02 pm
heartstodust SILVER, Edinburg, Texas
9 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i rather feel pain than nothing at all"- three days grace

"im tired of acting like everythings ok
my tears are starting to show
and my smile is fading away"

"I rather be hated for everything i am than to be loved for something that i can't"

wow great poem. same way i feel about a friend of mine. keep writing