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A Mothers Love

April 29, 2022
By Wisteria-S BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
Wisteria-S BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Rock and Roll, buckaroo!" -Shane Madej


You don't understand,

you never do,

I try to explain,

but I can't get through to you.

I wish you’d listen,

I wish you’d care,

If only your heart,

had room to spare.

I tell you the truth,

that I feel so depressed,

but you say I'm okay,

I thought you would know best.

I sit in the tub,

as it fills with water,

My wrists stained crimson red,

wishing I could be the “perfect daughter”.

You always said it’s just a phase,

telling me to pray to god above,

When all I ever wanted,

was just a mothers love.

I thought you would get it,

Why I’m acting this way,

but you don’t listen,

to what I have to say.

I feel all alone,

but I know that’s not true.

I have all my friends,

but I wish I had you.


The author's comments:

I wrote this poem because growing up my mother was never really around. She was there physically sometimes, but never emotionally. She has always treated me like an outcast and has never truly been proud of who I am and who I am becoming. She's always had something awful to say about me as a person no matter what it is.


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Afra ELITE said...
on May. 11 2022 at 11:49 pm
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Well, this poem is full of emotion and is really strong...The feelings you had for how your mother was to you, is felt by the reader...The last two lines were touching though...Honestly, this gave me goosebumps...⭐⭐⭐