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Missing My Love

January 31, 2009
By jaydd BRONZE, Mary Esther, Florida
jaydd BRONZE, Mary Esther, Florida
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I lie alone here on my bed
Thinking of you inside my head.
Why you left i have not a clue
All i can do is keep missing you.

Please come back
I can't stand being alone
Please come back
Or at least call home.

I need to hear your vioce
Like an angel choir singing.
I need to feel your touch,
Such a heavenly healing.

I need you more than ever
Like the crops need rain.
I have to hold you once more
To keep away the pain.

Hark! a noise, could that be you?
Have you returned off of cue?
The door opens and slowly creaks,
The light of sun begins to creep.
I feel so nervous, i begin to pray,
But i cannot see who's in the doorway.

I asked who's there as if tied to the tracks
And my lover stepped forward, back home at last.

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This article has 7 comments.

on Nov. 12 2009 at 8:36 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 497 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I LOVE it great job!!! :) You are a natural, everything rhymes so perfectly!!! :) Check out my work sometime! :) Your sister's work is really good too! :)

BeckaSue7 said...
on Feb. 20 2009 at 4:15 am
That was an amazing poem!!! Keep going don't stop your an awesome writer!!Maybe be famous one day! lol but seriously great job!!!!!

VC said...
on Feb. 18 2009 at 3:16 pm
Well Done JDD! I look forward to reading more of your work.

Irene said...
on Feb. 18 2009 at 3:09 pm

Garden Soul said...
on Feb. 17 2009 at 3:14 pm
Real thinker here. Hope to see more like this.

amandac_15 said...
on Feb. 16 2009 at 8:51 pm
Total sweetness! This is awesome. You deserve it. Keep writing! love ya baby! =D -AEC

on Feb. 16 2009 at 7:58 pm
way to go jeremiah! nice work!