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Dance till the end
June 18, 2015
In the beginning of the song
When it was slow
I still danced along
I went with the flow
The drumbeats that I heard later
Made me go faster
The song got even better
Like a growing aster
I tapped my feet to the beat
My hands moving along
The music that my ears would eat
My mind drenched with the song
I took two steps forward
And then spinned around
By the rhythm I was showered
Enchanted by the sound
Silence is my foe
And music, my friend
I danced till the dawn
I danced till the end
© Denise A., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 11 comments.
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Sep. 17 2015 at 8:19 am
Sure and thanks for the comment :)
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Sep. 17 2015 at 8:18 am
I meant *it lol
HammadWaseem said...
on Sep. 13 2015 at 10:19 am
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Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 11:46 pm
Thanks a lot :) I appreciate it.
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 11:45 pm
I'm glad you liked you...thank you!
Congrats getting the Editor's Choice! I really like the concept of this poem, as well as the way you got the inspiration for it. I feel like the rhyme scheme made the poem flow well, but my favorite part was definitely the last few lines. Keep writing :)
Cam_is_Away said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 2:47 pm
Fantastic job!
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:09 pm
Thank you so so sooo much :)
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Jun. 22 2015 at 12:07 pm
Thank you for your suggestion...well, I really agree :)
I went to my friend's party yesterday and the cheerful and electric atmosphere there , made me write this poem :)