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The Dreams She Had

June 2, 2015
By HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
HayatC. PLATINUM, Louisville, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one."

The dreams she had
They’re an enigmatic species of dreams
Reserved. Sentimental. Prepossessing.
With eyes overflowing with luxurious promises
Smiles like the lulling rhythm of a waterfall
Magnetic forces so potent they tap the margin of tangibility
Deceitful. Double-edged. Charmfully lethal.
She'll regret giving in to them

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on Jun. 22 2015 at 1:15 pm
Promethean SILVER, Kanpur, Other
8 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye will make the whole world blind....

words chosen are very good, but I think it need some improvement.

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 21 2015 at 9:38 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

"Charmfully lethal" are my favorite pair of words from this piece. I think that the last line is so powerful that it should have been given its very own stanza, but other than that, this is a lovely piece. Keep writing :)

on Jun. 21 2015 at 6:16 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
13 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Take a lesson from "the Greatest Man That Ever Lived," Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses." - Me, 2017

"Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?" - Corey Graves, 2016

A nice tale of those that take advantage to your kindness. It really teaches those kind of people a lesson.