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love or lust?

January 9, 2009
By SkaterGurl17 GOLD, Jasper, Georgia
SkaterGurl17 GOLD, Jasper, Georgia
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i can't complain about the things you mentally do to me-
after all i accept the way you wanna be- but i hurt to bad with pain i can't enjoy-i often think my heart is your toy-
this started like a journey for me-
but now all this is doing is hurting me-
i wish you could see the things you do to me-
this is hard to bear this is something you would never want to see-
it starts with my heaert being crushed- then days later you call me showing me love and gaining my trust-
days later when i'm starting heal i'm without you again- then my heart starts to bend-
BUT staying true to you is a MUST-
i often wonder do you really love me or is this just lust?

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Meli_mel said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 8:54 pm
I really, really like this. The rhyme scheme is good and you captured emotions well...your topic is something a lot of people can relate too. Good job!