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January 4, 2009
By xXpoetryaiXx SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
xXpoetryaiXx SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Give into love or live in fear"


What do you see when u look at me?
Do you see who I'm supposed to be?
Or the real me?
Do I live a lie?
Or do I fly and let days pass by,
Do I swim in fears?
Or walk on a path
Do you know me
Am I shy and let my worries go by
Or am I loud and just want life to unfold,
Do I cry at night and fear for my life,
Do I smile for a day but the pain never goes away?
Can in be true?
Or do I have no clue?
Am I me?
Can this really be?
Am I her?
Or am I no place near?
That's right
I'm not trying to when a fight
I am me and that's all I wish to be



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on Mar. 14 2010 at 12:35 am
Angel.Lynn GOLD, Livermore, California
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The line that divides good and evil will, now and forever, be blurred.

What can I say? I do believe that you have great talent and that you will someday achieve great things with your writing. This poem in particular touched me deeply. You conveyed something with your words that I could not, even begin to fathom putting down- even though these are the words that I feel I have been searching for. I thank you for fulfilling my quest of these few but important words. I love your work and encourage you to write more. :)

on Nov. 13 2009 at 2:43 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx