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Hearts

July 28, 2014
By EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
15 articles 2 photos 46 comments

A broken heart
that does not mend
will turn to stone
in the end



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EttieGH GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2015 at 2:25 am
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
15 articles 2 photos 46 comments
Will try to.

on Mar. 5 2015 at 3:32 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Very nice rhythm, very good rhyme, and a good moral as well. I like this very much, keep writing.

on Jul. 31 2014 at 12:48 am
LaurelPeterson BRONZE, Snohomish, Washington
1 article 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time spent with cats is never wasted.
-Sigmund Freud

This is really great. I like the meaningful message and the clever rythm.

EttieGH GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2014 at 11:19 am
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
15 articles 2 photos 46 comments
Thanks:) That's so encouraging for me:D

on Jul. 30 2014 at 10:59 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is beautiful! Great job, this is going into my faves! XD