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A Secret
July 24, 2014
A secret to be wary,
but one I have to carry.
A secret that's deep,
but it's a promise I have to keep.
A secret that weeps tears of blood,
and from it crimson flowers bud.
A secret that's red;
one that has bled.
© Taqiy M., Philadelphia, PA
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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 31 2014 at 9:42 am
Thank you! I'll use the corrections you told me ^_^ thank you so much, for being honest. And no, haha. you're not mean or merciless, you're just being honest : ) and I thank you for being honest. Also, I'll keep wriitng ^_^
Your poem is very well-written. It has a lot of imagery and great descriptions, although it's short. However, it is difficult to understand the point of your poem. You could, perhaps, make it longer and fix that. Yeah know. I'm mean. Evil. Merciless. Don't let us discourage you. Just keep writing!
